Dear beautiful stranger who stared at me
on the escalator -
I think we could make something happen.
I have seen a house with walls white as pages.
We could take it.
I have a lot of belongings.
You might like my poems.
I might admire your ambition.
We could swim in each other,
compare our crap drawings of trees.
Comments
camilla | January 9, 2011 - 15:14
Liked it particularly "white as pages" "crap drawing of trees"
insertponceyfre... | January 9, 2011 - 17:57
I really like this one span
fatboy74 | January 9, 2011 - 23:19
Love this - well done. :-)
seashore | January 10, 2011 - 08:29
Lovely.
shoe | January 10, 2011 - 09:55
Something in these few lines that captivates, richly deserved cherry.
JoseHdz | January 11, 2011 - 21:56
love it.
Cavalcaderl | January 16, 2011 - 00:21
new span
Enjoyed this to
Well deserved cherry!
Like same line as camilla
"white as pages"
"crap drawings of trees"
julie x
barryj1 | January 17, 2011 - 13:29
Very visual poem. I especially liked the tongue-in-cheek humor.
tcook | January 19, 2011 - 16:23
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