On the Downs
Life was made for such days.
Sun enough to soften the grass.
A breeze so light it brushes
like a kiss from someone
barely known, though
coming familiar - brushes
like the wing-tips
of the gulls, skimming the
skin of water, raising no
ripple in their wake.
Ships pass at a blue distance.
The sound only of dogs -
heard as at night, across
valleys, in old dreams.
I take the steps to the
sea wall, kicking pebbles
off the edge as I head along,
thinking of little except
a line of verse, the sense of
worth intrinsic to this, the
comfort of familiar things.
I glimpse her in passing -
a moment in the shine of an eye,
a flick of hair, a thing not said.
I look back.
There are possibilities.
Always, there are possibilities.

Comments
skinner_jennifer | January 12, 2012 - 09:59
Wonderful read and so poetic.
Thankyou for sharing.
Jenny.
Edenfalls | January 12, 2012 - 12:41
Stan, thanks for this. It really works well. I like the line " a breeze so light it brushes like a kiss from someone barely known". Brilliant use of words.
scratch | January 12, 2012 - 20:25
Nothing wrong with that Stan.
lyssagurl_l0l | January 16, 2012 - 00:46
Beautiful. Really love the last two stanzas
This spoke to me, thank you :)
~:)alyssa(:~
Denzella | April 11, 2012 - 20:36
OOoooh Stan,
Loved this one. 'A moment in the shine of an eye'
'There are possibilities.
Always, there are possibilities.'
As always...enjoyment overload!
Moya