On The Downs


from the ABC set Pomes

On the Downs

Life was made for such days.
Sun enough to soften the grass.
A breeze so light it brushes
like a kiss from someone
barely known, though
coming familiar - brushes

like the wing-tips
of the gulls, skimming the
skin of water, raising no
ripple in their wake.

Ships pass at a blue distance.
The sound only of dogs -
heard as at night, across
valleys, in old dreams.

I take the steps to the
sea wall, kicking pebbles
off the edge as I head along,
thinking of little except
a line of verse, the sense of
worth intrinsic to this, the
comfort of familiar things.

I glimpse her in passing -
a moment in the shine of an eye,
a flick of hair, a thing not said.
I look back.

There are possibilities.
Always, there are possibilities.

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Comments

skinner_jennifer | January 12, 2012 - 09:59

Wonderful read and so poetic.

Thankyou for sharing.

Jenny.

Edenfalls | January 12, 2012 - 12:41

Stan, thanks for this. It really works well. I like the line " a breeze so light it brushes like a kiss from someone barely known". Brilliant use of words.

scratch | January 12, 2012 - 20:25

Nothing wrong with that Stan.

lyssagurl_l0l | January 16, 2012 - 00:46

Beautiful. Really love the last two stanzas
This spoke to me, thank you :)

~:)alyssa(:~

Denzella | April 11, 2012 - 20:36

OOoooh Stan,

Loved this one. 'A moment in the shine of an eye'

'There are possibilities.
Always, there are possibilities.'

As always...enjoyment overload!

Moya