When You Said My Name


from the ABC set Poems

I caught your gaze in media res saying my name.
It seemed such a novelty, spouting from your lips,
like a fountain dripping sounds so fluid I was sure
my eyes saw each letter drawn on the nighttime sky
with the elegance of an Arabic calligrapher
before a single sound funneled into my ear canals.
Had the night been cooler, each escaping breath
would have crystallized into an abstract work of art
avant-garde enough to be featured in any MoMA
and I wonder whether the color of the precipitate
would have matched the arctic blue of your irises.
The chill I got from your hushed tone, causing each
syllable to seep into my muscles, was the only thing
keeping my balance as I stood there, capsized,
wondering for the first time if my name was actually
some fanciful French turn of phrase, a word
to be hummed only in the ear of another lovebird
under the guiding warmth of a full moon’s embrace.
To you, it was a simple hello, a careless siren call.
To me, it was a masterpiece with my name on it.

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Comments

tcook | July 13, 2010 - 15:25

A late cherry on a re-read - but still very deserved!

staticshakedown | July 13, 2010 - 15:28

Hah, thank you very much :D

Cavalcaderl | July 13, 2010 - 18:31

new staticshakedown
well enjoyed and see
a cherry! good liked the images to.
julie