Moment

Posted by SundaysChild on May 15, 2009 - 20:36
from the ABC set Life is Bittersweet

You asked me- what is life?- and
well, what could I say?
It is this moment; hand in hand,
Whilst Time ticks away.

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Sunday, this is another terrific little poem. The phrase 'hand in hand' adds some classy ambiguity to the overall effect.

Thanks.
JM.

Thank you, JM- I am very pleased indeed that you liked it :)

Another one that packs a great big punch! Well done ;)

Magic xxx

Thanks Magic :)

Magical!

Chris

Thanks so much, threeleafshamrock :)