They took off their shoes as he insisted and he led her inside; his hand was cool and soft. Her heart pounded but she smiled serenely as he chatted to her about something in his garden. She was finding it hard to pay attention- there was something making her feel uneasy but she was unable to pinpoint it.
She glanced around the room; red walls, dark furniture- oppressive.
Would you like a drink? he asked
Yes- some wine if that's possible?
Whilst he was gone she studied her nails. Her polish was chipped. Not a good impression. She didn't want to look cheap. Clearly he had money. She wanted to give out the right signals. Willing but slightly aloof. Intriguing.
He returned, handed her a glass of red wine. She sipped it. It was sharp, unpleasant and she narrowly avoided spitting it out.
He watched her face. She avoided his eyes. She cleared her throat, tried to shift the horrible after taste.
Is there something wrong? he asked
No, no- not at all. She composed herself. Why don't you show me around?
Into the dining room. Eclectic style, heavy curtains. She winced as she stubbed her bare toe on the table leg. Fuck that hurt. He hadn't noticed.
He was discussing the artwork framed on his walls. Women, nudes, demons. She stifled a giggle. This was somehow becoming absurd. He turned to face her and she grinned at him brightly. His mouth was rubbery and suddenly repulsive. The potential money was no longer appealing. She longed to reach into her bag, grab her mobile and call a taxi. Be polite, she told herself, just carry on a bit longer, then make your excuses and leave.
The kitchen, he was saying, is my pride and joy.
He grabbed her arm and pulled her towards him.
Come and see, he whispered.
Was there something menacing in his tone or was she starting to imagine things? Her body felt heavy and her head was spinning.
She had to lean against him as they walked into the kitchen. Lots of marble. A large table. He pushed her onto a chair and sat opposite her.
You should be starting to feel the effects now, he said conversationally.
She swallowed, her heartbeat was out of control. Drugs, poison, Something. He'd done something. The horror of it snaked itself around her, suffocating her.
Soon you will be my little plaything, he joked.
Her mother had always warned her of the dangers of the world, but she never thought it could have happened like this. A dinner date. A friend of a friend.
He stood up and hugged her to him. She could smell his shirt was sweaty and gagged. He pulled away, angry.
You stupid bitch, he muttered.
She was losing consciousness. Through the fog she saw the bowl on the table. How had she missed that? A bowl full of rotten cherries. They glittered dangerously. He laughed and smacked her to the ground.

Comments
celticman | November 21, 2010 - 19:37
emm cherries again, but at least this lots rotten. Well done. Good take on the IP.
pinda | November 21, 2010 - 19:45
I enjoyed reading this Sunday, good build-up and a very sinister plot. I don't normally read stories on this site, they tend to be long and drag however, you've turned me around. I'll definetely look out for your short stories.
Nice work, and you deserved those cherries.
X
Pinda
Highhat | November 22, 2010 - 09:12
A very good piece Sunday. A great take on the IP. Well deserved cherries.
;)Pia
luigi_pagano | November 22, 2010 - 09:38
A dark, well written, piece SundaysChild. I liked the 'rotten cherries' metaphor. Well done.
Luigi x
Bradene | November 22, 2010 - 16:55
A spine tingling taste of what could easily be a longer story. Very well done and worthy of the two sparking fresh cherries that reside beside it. Valx
Silver Spun Sand | November 22, 2010 - 18:22
A pair of well-deserved cherries. A much savoured story;-)
Tina
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:02
Many thanks Pia, glad you enjoyed!
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:04
Grazie mille, luigi x
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:05
Many thanks for your kind comment Val!
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:09
Thank you Tina, much appreciated :)
Also for some reason I did not see the first two comments from celticman and pinda until now...cheers guys for the feedback :)
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:12
And thanks abctales for the (not rotten) cherry :D
maggyvaneijk | November 22, 2010 - 19:39
wow, a great interpretation of the IP. You've got me wanting more!
SundaysChild | November 22, 2010 - 19:46
Thanks for the encouraging comment maggyvaneijk :)
michscor | November 22, 2010 - 22:30
I enjoyed this. Fast-paced, intensive with lots of energy, nothing superfluous. I like how you captured the volte-face, the woman no longer finding the man attractive, the man no longer appearing attractive and I thought the allusions to money and wealth really made the story vivid.
SundaysChild | November 23, 2010 - 00:50
Thanks michscor, glad you liked it :)
fatboy74 | November 24, 2010 - 22:55
Really enjoyed Sundayschild, completely agree with what has been said and cherries well deserved. :-)
SundaysChild | November 25, 2010 - 14:35
Many thanks fatboy :)
kheldar | November 25, 2010 - 15:26
Excellent, well paced, gritty, compelling.
Well done on the small red fruits.
:--)
Beeme | November 26, 2010 - 22:08
Brilliant short story- richly deserved cherries. I really enjoyed! It's so great to be reading your work again! :D
Beeme xx