Looking back,
I'm in awe:
I missed the entire
summer of 2004.
On the floor
on a makeshift bed,
I got to know you
rather well instead.
I have no regrets,
none at all;
you liked the whip
and I love to crawl.
Sticky limbs
and wicked showers,
pale pale skin,
I'd lick for hours.
Amazing walls
amazing floors
amazing just what
you can do indoors.
Every game and every
word; everything I saw-
and I fell in love,
that summer of '04.
Comments
Beeme | November 27, 2009 - 20:40
Marvellous poem, I really enjoyed. Love the last stanza especially.
Beeme xx
insertponceyfre... | November 27, 2009 - 21:14
lovely poem Sundayschild! xx
Silver Spun Sand | November 28, 2009 - 11:29
Great poem;-)x
Curse of 222 | November 29, 2009 - 02:37
"I have no regrets,
none at all;
you liked the whip
and I love to crawl."
Excellent!
jason
MistakenMagic | November 30, 2009 - 16:26
Really loved the rhythm in this one Sunday! Well done on the cherry ;)
Magic xxx
Cavalcaderl | November 30, 2009 - 21:22
new SundaysChild
Well done on the cherry!
that's quick it's working
hee! hee!
julie xx
SundaysChild | December 3, 2009 - 19:38
Thank you so much everybody :) Your comments make me happy.
Thank you abctales for the cherry.
BeKsta | December 2, 2010 - 23:22
wicked and clever :)