Valediction to Summer Love


from the ABC set Miscellany

Rain today
and oppressive clouds steal close
sucking the light
from the windows
taking the last of summer
and promises of carefree pleasures
under a maturing sun

I long for the scent
of sun on skin once more
to lose myself in long grass
and to your desire
But the smell of autumn
hangs on the wind
foretelling of torpid days ahead

Rain today
and the seasons mists
will soon envelope me
As the hum of the last bee fades
I will find warmth
in my reminiscences
But today it rains

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Comments

tamara (not verified) | September 14, 2008 - 19:23

This is beautiful.

sunshine | September 15, 2008 - 08:06

thank you Tamara, I appreciate your comment. Margot

Silver Spun Sand | September 15, 2008 - 14:18

Absolutely beautiful.

sunshine | September 17, 2008 - 07:29

Many thanks Tina. And thanks Tony for the cherries. Margot

niki72 | September 17, 2008 - 19:15

Very sad and poignant. Really liked it.

sunshine | September 18, 2008 - 18:52

thanks Niki. Margot

Bradene | October 13, 2008 - 13:27

A beautiful, beautiful write I congratulate you. Val x

mykle | April 17, 2009 - 06:59

Noticed you logged on today and needing some Sunshine I clicked on your name and was rewarded by this beautiful poem!
Don't be a stranger we all need more Sunshine!