4 Fibs


from the ABC set Humorous Ramblings

I
would
love sex
but of course
it is up to you.
What was it you said your name was?

That
cold
wind has
shot straight up my kilt
and is fast freezing my nuts off.

Pissed,
broke,
thrown out
of the pub;
too early for home
to late to go anywhere else.

That
beer
is rank
and has filled
me with bloody wind;
oops, God; make that diarrhoea

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Comments

Bradene | July 20, 2009 - 15:26

Lol very funny and a good try, but Sorry to be picky number two is wrong Icy is two syllables. (; Val xx

threeleafshamrock | July 20, 2009 - 17:03

Thanks Val ;)changed it

Bradene | July 20, 2009 - 17:08

That's much better, Great stuff. Val x

sarah wilson | July 20, 2009 - 17:44

Marvelous fibbing!:)

threeleafshamrock | July 20, 2009 - 18:03

;) thanks Sarah