Birthday Magic


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

Your legal now, abandon cares;
get in there girl and up those stairs.
You pause and shudder; what's in store?
You've never been this far before.
Lick your lips and flick your hair,
do you want this, do you care?
You think about the nights you've cried
you're just a girl, they smiled and sighed.
Well, they can't say that from now on,
and overnight they'll change their song.
You'll show them, you're a woman grown
and by God, your mind's your own;
you'll flaunt and flatter; flirt and poke
and share in every dirty joke
and if the time is right for you,
you'll take a lover; maybe two.
You've snapped the adolescant chain
and nothing now will be the same.
Here I come, they'll hear you scream;
you want it all, you want the cream.
You grab the knob and push it in;
the sudden hush becomes a din.
He grabs you, searching in your eyes;
I love you darling, proudly sighs...
and as the music plays, he'll whirl
his gorgeous eighteenth birthday girl.

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Comments

MistakenMagic | October 9, 2009 - 21:11

Oh Chris! I'm speechless! This is beautiful *tears up* Thank you so much! It is one of the best presents I've received today!!! Thank you :) :) :)

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | October 10, 2009 - 11:29

Your welcome, happy birthday ;) XXXX

Beeme | October 10, 2009 - 16:21

Great poem Chris, Happy birthday Magic! :) :) XXX

MistakenMagic | October 10, 2009 - 16:32

Thank you Beeme :P Just getting ready for my party - slipping on the good old little black dress! My little sister (she's sixteen) is desperate for me to let her do my make-up!

Magic xxx

SundaysChild | October 10, 2009 - 17:12

Have a great time!
xxx

Cavalcaderl | October 11, 2009 - 15:09

New threeleafshamrock
Great poem for Magics 18th.
I tried one to comments it
may not follow?sometimes
all help from all please.
julie xx

tcook | October 12, 2009 - 09:52

Got over the hangover yet? Congratulations - it's going to be some year for you!

MistakenMagic | October 12, 2009 - 14:29

Thank you SundaysChild and Tony! It's not so much an alcohol-related hangover - more a 'I haven't done any school work for 4 days' sort of hangover! So much to catch up on!

Magic xxx