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Castles of Mist

Posted by threeleafshamrock on April 27, 2011 - 21:45
from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

I do not seek truth,
just tell me, that you need me;
sooth my breaking heart.
Whisper promises softly,
building castles in my mind -
though they be as mists,
that will dissipate quickly,
with the morrow's rising sun.
Tonight, I will climb
and sing from their battlements,
beneath a lover's moon.

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kheldar | April 28, 2011 - 07:45

Liked this a lot. You really capture the pognancy and the sense of desperation.

"I do not seek truth,
just tell me, that you need me"

Great stuff,

Kheldar :--)