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First Impressions I.P.

Posted by threeleafshamrock on March 31, 2009 - 16:53
from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

She broke the silence with a smile,
that waned at my surprise.
I answered; too late!
The lack of instinctive reaction
not lost in unfamiliarity.
She had needed;
expected more!

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Comments

a.jay | March 31, 2009 - 18:44

thirty words very well spent. enjoyed this a lot mr.shamrock.
ax

Dynamaso | April 1, 2009 - 03:31

Yet another great short, sharp piece. This week's IP is really bringing 'em out. Excellent, mate.

jennifer | April 1, 2009 - 10:41

Short, sharp and good, well done!

J x

MistakenMagic | April 1, 2009 - 19:40

I agree with everyone else - love this week's IP ;) Well done on another good 'un Chris!

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | April 12, 2009 - 13:02

Thanks guys; trying to catch up on all your work and comments.