Full of Empty


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

The clock ticks loudly, in the hall,
it holds her battered mind in thrall,
She feels the need to scream or bawl,
in this house, full of empty.

She turns on lights and wanders ‘round,
shifts a chair, to hear the sound,
feels lost, on this common ground,
in this house, full of empty.

The cat is hiding; must have sensed,
Sanity, no longer fenced;
everything is so condensed,
in this house, full of empty.

A hockey stick, a football boot,
discarded recklessly, on route;
tell the story, yet are mute,
in this house, full of empty.

A mirror, spitefully reflects
a furrowed brow and then detects
the weekend sadness, that infects,
in this house, full of empty.

The judge had ruled, to his delight,
he get the kids, for weekend nights.
She doesn’t think it’s fair, or right,
in this house, full of empty.

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Comments

Highhat | February 27, 2011 - 14:52

I like this
;)

insertponceyfre... | February 27, 2011 - 15:06

I do too - it flows very well

threeleafshamrock | February 27, 2011 - 15:08

Thanks so much folks, appreciate you taking the time,

Chris ;)

SteveM | February 28, 2011 - 12:18

Great stuff... this one deserves to be Cherrypicked.

Luly Whisper | February 28, 2011 - 20:31

Good poem.

threeleafshamrock | March 3, 2011 - 12:52

Thanks Steve and Luly, appreciate it a lot.

Chris ;)