She sits and knits
A cardigan
And dreams of Paris
Looking out of the window
Into the field of fresh mown hay
She watches him
He stands, stretching
Looking skyward,
Hands massaging
His lower back.
One of the young men
Look to him,
His lips moving,
While shaping a smile.
The retort is made,
He will raise his left eyebrow
As he does so!
It will be droll,
Without rancour; funny!
The other boy, or is it man?
Yes! Man now, she thinks;
Walks to him,
Puts a hand on his shoulder.
Banter; unanimous laughter,
Unanimous love!
Forty years!
Was it really forty?
They had held hands in Paris,
Her new ring
As conspicuous
As the Eiffel Tower,
On the landscape of her finger
He had kissed her in public!
She knew then,
How much he loved her;
This shy, quiet man;
This beautiful human being
That she adored.
She would love to knit
I LOVE YOU!
But smiles at the thought
He would raise
His left eyebrow
And drolly state;
“Sure, don’t I know that!”
So she just sits and knits
Smiling, watching him;
And dreams of Paris!

Comments
luigi_pagano | February 20, 2009 - 11:50
A nice romantic tale with good opening lines which are refrained at the end of the poem with good effect.
threeleafshamrock | February 20, 2009 - 12:14
Thank you Luigi
Lem | February 20, 2009 - 13:26
Like Luigi, I like the way your repeat the opening lines at the end. It is a sweet poem full of nostalgia and happy memories.
Nathan Bednarek | February 20, 2009 - 15:54
'They had held hands in Paris,
Her new ring
As conspicuous
As the Eiffel Tower,
On the landscape of her finger'
I love the imagery in this stanza and throughout. This is a great response to the inspiration point challenge.
How great would it be if every love story was like this ;-)
Thank you for posting this lovely poem and well done.
Nathan.
Doeslittle | February 20, 2009 - 17:02
What a fine romance. I like poems that tell a story. Nice work.
threeleafshamrock | February 22, 2009 - 13:07
Thanks folks, appreciate the comments. ;)
Silver Spun Sand | February 22, 2009 - 13:28
I missed this one before, Chris. I agree with all that has been said and I very much enjoyed it:-)
Tina x