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Loves’ Descent

Posted by threeleafshamrock on April 2, 2009 - 11:32
from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

How could love,
in its lofty penthouse,
descend past the middle floors
of dislike
and into the basement of hate;
as a stone heart,
toppled from its
unprotected balcony;
Lying there shattered!

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Comments

MistakenMagic | April 2, 2009 - 16:32

Oooo I like this one Chris! Brilliant imagery and well said ;)

Magic xxx

Silver Spun Sand | April 2, 2009 - 17:31

I agree wholeheartedly with Magic, Chris. 'Basement of hate'... I like that.

Tina xx

Dynamaso | April 3, 2009 - 00:06

I agree with the two lovely ladies above, Chris. This one is particularly satisfying.

Nathan Bednarek | April 3, 2009 - 12:23

Just wow ;-)

This is a lovely little poem, well done.

Nathan.

threeleafshamrock | April 12, 2009 - 13:01

Thanks all. This I.P. brought out some of the best work that I have seen on here - in my opinion.

scoot | May 30, 2009 - 11:46

i love this.
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