Night Drive


from the ABC set Lurve Ramblings

Lunar shadows, dapple darkened highways,

in negative wonder.

Black shapes bob, rippling the glassy calm,

gently waving the laps.

Ray LaMontagne is leaving New York,

bringing his soul to me.

A lover’s message, lights the cabin

and my heart flies to her.

The intermittent white line keeps time;

She loves me, she loves me not,

She loves me, she loves me not……..

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Comments

luigi_pagano | March 19, 2011 - 10:48

A very effective, well crafted poem, Chris.

SundaysChild | March 19, 2011 - 16:12

Very good, much enjoyed.

threeleafshamrock | March 27, 2011 - 11:41

Thank you Luigi, much appreciated

Chris ;)

threeleafshamrock | March 27, 2011 - 11:42

Thank you SC, glad you enjoyed...

Chris ;)