Our First Kiss I.P.

Nice one!

This made me ponder and try to remember. Thank you for this lovely poem and sharing your experience.

;)Pia

Hi threeleafshamrock,

Wow! sounds wonderful, this IP has really got your
imagination going.

Jenny.

Thanks Seashore...and yes it was hehe

Chris ;)

Thanks Pia, thankfully (or woefully), it has been repeated on many occasions and never lost its charm :)

Chris ;)

Thanks Jenny, my imagination is always going; not always in the right direction hahaha

Chris ;)

new threeleafshamrock
Hi! enjoyed this charm poem.
Let your imagination go, good
for an (IP) and 1st one.
julie xx

yes that awkward moment when you know your nose is too big, and will you end up with a bash of teeth, lol. Not to mention the fact that specs get tangled...

i remember it well...........!
good poem

Thanks for the kind comments Julie

Chris ;)

Thanks Maisie, I remember it well lol

Chris ;)

Well expressed. I like the driving analogy, the driving rhythm and the striking imagery which you use. Especially:

"Eyes locking briefly,
like the headlights
of oncoming vehicles.
Navigating the darkness,
on a collision course,
driven by lover's dreams."

No favorite line here, the whole thing is truly amazing. I love how you stick to using one type of image for a metaphor, which really brings out that impact of the first kiss were your entire self is focusing only on one thing. Brilliant! A cherry from me!

Nathan.

Thanks Well Wisher and Nathan, appreciate you both taking the time to read...

Chris ;)