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Posted by threeleafshamrock on September 23, 2010 - 18:18
from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

Staccato words, carried
on winds of change,
hammer rusting Armour -
some breaching;
Love, Dead, Regret, Over!
Mortally wounding an
already bleeding heart.

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Comments

maggyvaneijk | September 23, 2010 - 18:44

A very sharp poem, perfectly describing the feeling that follows those final words, it´s over.

russiandoll | September 24, 2010 - 09:58

Ouch!

This stabs... well done.

threeleafshamrock | September 24, 2010 - 10:02

Thanks Maggy for taking the time to read and comment

Chris XX

threeleafshamrock | September 24, 2010 - 10:03

Thanks Russiandoll, the barbs can be wicked ;)

Chris XX

MistakenMagic | September 24, 2010 - 17:59

'staccato words' - lovely image, Chris. Superb little poem ;)

Magic xxx

threeleafshamrock | September 24, 2010 - 18:21

Thanks Magic for reading and your comments...

Chris XXXX