Separate Aisles


from the ABC set shamrock's ramblings

I ran into you, in the store today.

We shared a mutual ‘Hello!’

The awkward silence, was tangible
and hung in the air, like winter fog.

I smiled, shrugging my eyebrows,
nodding stupidly, half raising a hand.

You plagiarised my performance,
adding an innovative side-step.

I wondered if you still had the penknife,
that I had given to you, that summer.

We had both scored our initials,
into the bark of the old Greenwich Oak;

You had carved a heart around both,
I had fashioned the arrow, piercing.

I thought of the tree, now matured,
faded love, among the branches;

as we walked down separate aisles.

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Comments

insertponceyfre... | February 4, 2011 - 12:37

I really like this one Chris.

These lines especially:

I smiled, shrugging my eyebrows,
nodding stupidly, half raising a hand.

You plagiarised my performance,
adding an innovative side-step.

threeleafshamrock | February 4, 2011 - 13:02

Wow, thanks Insert, and a cherry too...well, that's cheered up a stormy, rain sodden day in the west of Ireland, I can tell you.

Chris ;)

seashore | February 4, 2011 - 14:11

Lovely.

SundaysChild | February 4, 2011 - 16:22

Very good.

fatboy74 | February 4, 2011 - 22:21

Yes I can only concur with all that praise. :-)

threeleafshamrock | February 5, 2011 - 19:34

Thanks Seashore, SC and FB..I seem to be hitting the right keys lately ;-)

Chris ;)