Life's Dulled Force

Propped up like a puppet strung to strings
Hanging on to life, painfully breathing
I see glimpses of the boy I knew
Now clawing for life

You writhe and dip, can barely speak
And when you do I can't make sense of it
But I don't cry

Gone is the glimmer in your eyes
Gone even element of surprise
Tired, embattled, you fought death
Now weak and spent, needing rest
A prayer swells for you as I walk away

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Comments

Yume1254 | February 3, 2012 - 19:11

Intriguing poem.

I like the sentiment of not crying when unable to make sense of something - it made me think.

Y.

Verdana | February 4, 2012 - 16:43

Emotions are mitigated by everything we're taking in all at once sometimes. Really appreciate your comment.