Mood Shift

A little repetitive. Perhaps a thesaurus?

J x

Yup sort of. Made it repetitive. Looked to have a greater impact. But that's how everyone's mood changes isn't it? I mean at one moment you are the happiest person in the world and the very next the most sad person.

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Hello! I like this it expresses
exactly how you and other's may feel.
Impact on me. Well what is a "Thesaurus"
does it come from "Di'nsauras".No I found
out book holding,mine got from market dictionary.
Absolutely true! Last line and some to become devine!
May the "Light of God shine!on you.We must let the
"Underdog's in.Like the Editor.t.Cook Abctales did
for me on my poem,gently with punctuations one or two.For me to put "I stand to be corrected,that's something.As tony's story say's "Hope,Love,Charity.
In a smallest corner?.God is my leading light,in all I Do and done! and try.Which has taken many years.
Take care!keep writing.
like all of this can identify.
julie x.

Thank you Julie.
I am glad you liked it.
Well Thesaurus in the sense that after a line the very next line express the exactly opposite mood as in an antonym of the previous one. So a Thesaurus. :)
I will surely keep writing. Thank you for the kind comment. :)