The Thing that peopel call love- The girl's perspective

The first time I saw you,
I fell for you.
I knew you were the one
And I could see that in your eyes too.
We met and we loved.
Oh it was not your mistake that we broke up,
But it was mine.
I never knew the one I had lost was a gem and not a stone.
I understood that soon.
I called you, I messaged you,
But you never replied.
Finally, I decided to meet you but it was all too late.
You were standing on the brink of death,
And I didn’t know what to do.
You saw me and you couldn’t bare it anymore.
Oh, it was me, who took your life,
Oh, I am the sinner.
I know that you loved me,
And now I love you.
It was the fate that separated us,
It prevented us from being one.
Oh now I understand the thing,
The thing that people call love.
But now I know what to do,
I am coming to you,
And we will be together soon.
Till then to the world:
I would be back some other time, some other day some other world.

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Comments

Cavalcaderl | August 13, 2009 - 14:21

New viditchopra
welcome to Abctales
I like this very much was it true!
seems to be to-day
I Love verse
Oh!
Now I understand the thing
the thing that people call love

But now I know what to do,
I am coming to you
and we wil;l be to-gether soon!

Till then to the world
I would be back some other time!
some other day
some other world?
Julie cavalcader

vidit.chopra | August 13, 2009 - 18:29

Hey thanks a lot Julie.
Well it's pure fiction
And yes I too love these lines.