Fear,
Your hold
on my heart
through all these years
has not lost its strength,
it forms an iron bond
stifling my love for you.
Hearts, like all delicate things need
a big portion of tender caring,
lest the love that lives there shrivels and dies.
I remember feeling the excitement
when first our eyes met, electric sparks
that flew from me to you, bright blue!
raging fire, head to toes,
I felt alive and free,
bubbling champagne
thundering falls
fire-works
sky dives
Love!
Comments
shoe | December 1, 2009 - 11:21
I really like the way this works,:-)
wandelaar | December 2, 2009 - 13:23
Hi shoe,
Thank you!
greetings
Keiko Shizuru | January 3, 2010 - 15:37
Well, this doesn't do 'something' to me.LOL !I'm sorry to say I find it rather tacky. As I said to you in your post to me, it's better to write for the pleasure of it, and not for the praises.Not everyone is going to like what we write.
keiko
wandelaar | January 3, 2010 - 21:21
Keiko Shizuru,
Thank you for reading and for your comment. It is so good that we all like different things isn't it?
Keiko Shizuru | January 4, 2010 - 00:33
Well, that's the whole point! Diversity. If not ,how boring it could be !
keiko