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tongue - twister (IP)

Posted by well-wisher on May 29, 2011 - 15:04
from the ABC set Poems

Two young,
gangly teens
entangle their
dangling tongues
in a tingling
tongue tango,
their trickling
spittle mingling
as they lick and tickle,
their two tongues tussling
in a tiny tug of love.

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Silver Spun Sand | May 29, 2011 - 15:37

Smashing, this, well-wisher;-) Some lovely use of vocabulary.

Tina

Highhat | May 29, 2011 - 15:42

Great- a very good tongue twister ;)Pia

skinner_jennifer | May 29, 2011 - 16:49

Hi well-wisher,

I really enjoyed saying this out loud and your
tongue twister had me going with its great rhythm.

Original IP.

Thanks for the read.

Jenny.

well-wisher | May 29, 2011 - 19:11

Thankyou,Tina, Pia and Jenny. I'm really glad that you all liked it. I've always liked Tongue Twisters like "Peter Piper Picked A Peck Of Pickled Peppers" and it just seemed to fit the subject of a "French" Kiss perfectly