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Your Kisses

Posted by well-wisher on October 24, 2011 - 02:03
from the ABC set Poems

There is a key within your kiss
which opens up eternal bliss.
Flowers; stars and sparkling gems,
your kisses overflow with them.

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Comments

Anne Shirley | October 24, 2011 - 03:51

Pretty! :)

Anne Shirley | October 24, 2011 - 03:52

Pretty! :)

skinner_jennifer | October 24, 2011 - 10:22

A Beautiful poem of love, really enjoyed.

Jenny.

well-wisher | October 24, 2011 - 18:07

Thankyou, Anne. I wanted it to be bright and sparkly
and a little like magic.

JoHn -

"Ex amore victoria". ("From love comes victory".)

well-wisher | October 24, 2011 - 18:08

Thank you, Jenny. I know its not very deep or profound but I was really focussing on the form rather than the content. Just a light hearted
little poem.

I think I really want to be like a maker of ornaments and figurines that go on mantlepieces.

JoHn -

"Ex amore victoria". ("From love comes victory".)