Building Castles

On Brighton beach, there is a stone,
long washed clean of blood, a Rocker
threw to brain a fleeing Mod.

There is a buried shard of wood,
from a broken deckchair leg,
once wielded as a club, with stabbing points.

If I had more than a plastic
bucket and spade, I might dig deeper
and find Saxon arrow-heads,

a Roman spear, a Celtic knife,
a Bronze Age axe, a sharpened flint,
an Angel's feather and dinosaur bones.

I build a castle and plant paper flags,
then jump up and down to smash it, when I'm bored.

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Comments

Jupiter | June 17, 2009 - 12:12

Ha! Ha! Nice poem although you might have a problem building any sort of decent castle - it's a pebble beach ;-)

WilkyBarKid | June 17, 2009 - 12:20

Maybe it's different now - I haven't been there since I was a kid - but you could dig on the shingly bit when the tide was out.

I could make it Clacton beach and lose the alliteration.

Or Bognor beach - but I don't think the Mods & Rockers fought there.

Bournemouth beach... ? Stop it, now. Stop over-analysing.

Jupiter | June 17, 2009 - 12:23

You may well be right Wilky. Tell you what, I'll remove it from my comment and we can then leave these 2 blank and nobody will be any the wiser if you like? '-)

threeleafshamrock | June 17, 2009 - 12:57

Lol, loved it. You could make it Margate (more mods than rockers there though) Mmmm, the smell of the Vespa, The Who, the Angels; chapters from hell. Oh happy childish memories...ahhh!

Chris ;)

chuck | June 17, 2009 - 13:04

Sarfend saw its share of punch-ups.

lenchenelf | June 17, 2009 - 15:52

Human nature and the rise and fall of civilisation covered quite neatly, all on a sunny afternoon, enjoyed reading atb Lena