conceits written about rivers


from the ABC set 2007

conceits written about rivers
as lifesblood flowing over rocks

veins too cold – a sculptor’s fingers
gouge tears of clay from the world’s face

brother son sits on a boulder
plunges golden hands into melt-

water, sharp razor swift shallows
that slash both wrists with icy blades

while sister shadow raises skirts
to stream raw silver down the slopes

contrive to stand, stout walking boots
athwart banks where bears hook salmon

countryside clawed by vain attempts
to escape wild oceans’ clutches

rivers are long straws to suck rain
from clouds – imagine: each drop cries

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