Modern Sonnet To A Sparrow

The common sparrow is long gone from gardens:
flown to the West Coast
to become a hawk or peacock,
to seek treatment for his feather allergy,
to bask beside a bird-bath,
where his every squawk is broadcast:
beamed across a tile-blue sky,
a flat-screen ceramic simulation
of peck-both-cheeks perfection -
dude, you're really flying -
while eaves are silent, empty...
suburban trees abandoned
and phone-wires ungripped by claws
that perch on more precarious heights.

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Comments

Silver Spun Sand | January 20, 2011 - 13:39

Nice one;-)

Tina

Sooz006 | January 21, 2011 - 09:31

Next time I see a sparrow, not that we see many any more, I'll be checking for factor thirty and a bottle of Evian. 'Dude' line is perfect.

fatboy74 | January 21, 2011 - 20:34

I like this. :-)