Thirty Days Of Julia: Day Seven


from the ABC set Thirty Days Of Julia

The tabby ball of snoozing fluff she called
Dory (as in Previn, not in Hunky)
was a fat cat I suggested would best
be named Tory. The wrong one hooked her claws
in me. Sat on my lap, nuzzled my neck
and left me breathless due to allergic
rhinitis. The bites on my neck were flea
not love. When I locked the door late at night,
I expected her to catch mice. Toms sang
as plaintive as whales in the deep ocean
of Essex. The stairwell stank of feline
graffiti beneath an illegible
scribble of human tags. Her litter tray
became a minefield for poor excuses.

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Comments

maisie | July 16, 2011 - 18:45

2 niggles: line 7 flea should it be fleas?
line 9 sang should it be song..?

apart from that it's grrrrrreat!

WilkyBarKid | July 17, 2011 - 10:24

Bit of poetic licence going on:

Flea-bites / love-bites.

Toms as in tom-cats sang. OK should be plaintively, but I eschew strict grammar in favour of sonics.