For you I hold an unknown world,
A place behind, the sands of time,
For life and love,
A song,
A smile,
An angel holding a sweet child,
Primrose summers,
Swings on a park,
Unknown people,
Friends we have made,
Times we have forgotten,
Times we have enjoyed,
Flying like a storm,
Listening to pink floyd,
My rythm has passed, but the words still flow,
A hundred miles we journeyed,
A hundred days more,
I felt it, the rush through my hair,
Stood up on end, like eddy monster,
Over and over again,
Dreaming of seeds
Fields of green
Wild strawberries,
Wild hair, electric blue,
Twisting fingers perfect for running through,
Tingling now as I'm slowing down,
Heart beat loosing pace,
Still unknown to me,
Alas
I haven't even seen your face
Comments
Kahdai | July 8, 2010 - 20:24
Wow Will I love this poem!
'Flying like a storm,
Listening to pink floyd,
My rythm has passed, but the words still flow,
A hundred miles we journeyed,
A hundred days more,
I felt it, the rush through my hair,'
I haven't even seen your face
Ah its exciting & little sad. :) x
WillSimpson | July 8, 2010 - 20:25
Damn it, I tried not to make it sad at all, I thought it was happy :(
Lol oh well, best try my happy genre attempt again.
Kahdai | July 8, 2010 - 20:33
It was except the end line :)
Kahdai | July 9, 2010 - 11:28
eddy monster?
WillSimpson | July 9, 2010 - 11:32
haha eddy monster, wiki pedia the little freak, he's great. When i was a kid my mam used to brush my hair in a wierd way, but I had little pointy ears and someone said I looked like eddy monster(they regretted it later haha) x
Kahdai | July 9, 2010 - 11:33
:D haha ok I get it(& no you dont!)! k x
WillSimpson | July 9, 2010 - 11:36
It should be Eddie Munster,
Kahdai | July 10, 2010 - 19:42
'Wild strawberries,' play the strawberries?
'Wild hair, electric blue,'
sounds like my picture Jungleblu
http://stonedragon317.deviantart.com/gallery/#_browse