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HOPELESS

Posted by Yazmin on October 1, 2008 - 15:52

Have you ever had that feeling
Of everything turning out wrong?
Perhaps a song you hate is played
Except worse than that
Life isn't always fun and games
Even happy ever afters
So in the end I came up with a solution
Seeing is believing, and believing is HOPELESS.

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Emma White | October 1, 2008 - 16:27

Some of your writing very much reminds me of myself a few years back, when i had a lot of pain to deal with, and i got it out through writing! From then onwards i realised i really enjoyed writing, and started to develop my skill of putting words together into fictional stories. I hope you keep writing, and showing us all how you are developing.

If it helps... i truly believe that people who are not true friends are not worth having!Concentrate on loving you! nothing is hopeless! Em.

Yazmin | October 10, 2008 - 08:58

Thank you thats exactly how I used to feel, I love some of your poems by the way
Yaz xx