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I Need You

Posted by Yazmin on March 5, 2009 - 17:33
from the ABC set My True Self, No Lies

I Need You like a Skunk needs a stink
I Need You like tears need a blink
I Need You like the Sun needs the Moon
I Need You like stupid needs a goon.
I Need You like ice needs water
I Need You like a mum needs a daughter
I need you like dark needs light
I Need You like a boxer needs a fight.

I Need You

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Nathan Bednarek | March 5, 2009 - 23:03

I really love the style of this poem Yazmin. It's very catchy. My favourite:

'I Need You like a boxer needs a fight.'

I don't know why, but I'm drawn to this line. Perhaps because I'm just a typical bloke ;-p

Good work, well done.

Nathan.

Yazmin | March 6, 2009 - 17:24

Thank You
Yes it is strange that your drawn to that line ;)
But Im not going to be sexist!