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I'd be anything for you.

Posted by Yazmin on January 26, 2010 - 20:58
from the ABC set My True Self, No Lies

Let me be your vacuum cleaner; Breathing in your dust.
Let me be your Ford Cortina; I will never rust.
If you like your coffee hot; I can be your coffee pot.
Let me be your raincoat; For those frequent rainy days.
Let me be your teddy bear; Take me with you anywhere.
Let me be your electric meter; I will not run out.
Let me be your fire, heater; You'll get cold without.
Let me be your setting lotion; Hold your hair with deep devotion.
Deep as the Atlantic Ocean.
Thats how deep is my devotion.

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Comments

exogenesis | January 27, 2010 - 08:23

sweet ant neat

shoe | January 27, 2010 - 10:54

cute, also lovely,:~}

Nathan Bednarek | January 27, 2010 - 14:56

'If you like your coffee hot; I can be your coffee pot.' I love this line and the whole poem is very sweet indeed.

However, try to remember my advice to proof read your work as many times as possible before you post it, because a little mistake sneaked in the first line- should be 'BreatHing' ;-)

I'm sure this was just a little typo. Overall, this was a very heart-warming read and thank you for posting it. Well done.

Nathan.

Yazmin | January 28, 2010 - 15:31

Thank you :)

Yaz