Sorry Daddy

Daddy said I was bad
Said i got what I earned
Claimed I drove him mad
Said I'd better have learned

Mum said that i cant tell
That he'll get into trouble
Said that daddy's unwell
Sent off on the double

Nurse said I cant go back
I have to live in a 'Home'
I'd die with one more smack
I've never felt so alone

Daddy died cuz of this
Suicide in a lorry
Home, I dont think I'll miss
But daddy I am so sorry

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Comments

Nathan Bednarek | October 2, 2008 - 14:36

Very touching and deep. Well done Yazmin.

Nathan.

tamara | October 2, 2008 - 23:30

Yes,it's a brave piece of writing,well done.x