I have never liked Winter
As it comes, as a thief, in the night
It creeps, and steals, The things you love
And it puts up a very good fight.
It stalks around the darkness
With a rage of cold, white smoke
It forms a cover of crystal poison
On the roads, many people, then choke.
I forget about the presents
And all the christmas lights
Because I have never liked Winter
As it comes, as a thief, in the night

Comments
tcook | May 26, 2009 - 15:39
The correct spelling is 'thief' - it's an easy one to get wrong!
Yazmin | May 31, 2009 - 09:54
Thanks so much :)
Yaz
_lynze_ | May 31, 2009 - 15:10
This is good, i like it. Good metaphores(Y)
-Lynze
Yazmin | June 22, 2009 - 18:21
Thank you, Im glad you enjoyed it
Yaz