i have a lot of respect for the writers on site and have enjoyed all the comments, but now i am asking for more criticism. i want to improve. i want to be a writer. i ask for your help. feel free to comment or shoot me a message. thanks for reading.
My Stories
On the Flight of Icarus Submitted on March 6, 2010 - 15:52 | 87 reads
The Twilight Edge of Sleep. Submitted on February 13, 2010 - 14:18 | 127 reads
Depth Submitted on February 4, 2010 - 21:03 | 113 reads
Ghosts In the Snow Submitted on December 28, 2009 - 18:06 | 107 reads
Swirls on Black Submitted on December 6, 2009 - 04:47 | 160 reads
be Bex Submitted on November 30, 2009 - 13:14 | 104 reads
Day Before the Day Before Submitted on November 14, 2009 - 13:56 | 156 reads
Garden Gnomes (the IP) Submitted on November 6, 2009 - 22:17 | 146 reads
There Be a Demon in My Heart Submitted on November 3, 2009 - 21:27 | 136 reads
Butterfly Submitted on October 7, 2009 - 23:34 | 157 reads
Far Man Out Submitted on October 7, 2009 - 23:03 | 116 reads
Condensed Cloud Milk in a Jar Submitted on September 26, 2009 - 00:56 | 247 reads
Pessimist's Autobiography Submitted on September 22, 2009 - 23:55 | 183 reads
The Broken Vowels (take two) Submitted on September 22, 2009 - 00:08 | 187 reads
The Broken Vowels Submitted on September 20, 2009 - 01:22 | 168 reads
A. I. (an I.P.) Submitted on September 10, 2009 - 22:39 | 299 reads
Ripe (I.P.) Submitted on September 5, 2009 - 13:03 | 308 reads
Daffadowndilly Submitted on September 3, 2009 - 02:06 | 263 reads
Grey Blues Submitted on August 29, 2009 - 15:16 | 214 reads
Definition Submitted on August 28, 2009 - 21:42 | 180 reads
for Michael Submitted on August 10, 2009 - 15:28 | 221 reads
thursday 2:22am Submitted on July 18, 2009 - 20:29 | 260 reads
come dance with me Submitted on July 16, 2009 - 22:46 | 188 reads
Do Not Think (i did not) Submitted on June 30, 2009 - 23:50 | 226 reads
Missing Submitted on June 28, 2009 - 13:30 | 300 reads
A Queen, a Bishop, and Two Shots Submitted on June 24, 2009 - 02:23 | 370 reads
The Fog (where headlights end) Submitted on June 22, 2009 - 22:40 | 257 reads
June 9, 2006 Submitted on June 17, 2009 - 20:25 | 243 reads
June 6, 2006 Submitted on June 16, 2009 - 02:48 | 225 reads
Think Whole Submitted on June 9, 2009 - 01:26 | 259 reads
the stream (trouble) Submitted on June 3, 2009 - 21:13 | 213 reads
Sunflower (I.P.) Submitted on June 1, 2009 - 20:50 | 236 reads
One (syllable, an I.P., for mistaken magic) Submitted on May 26, 2009 - 20:37 | 309 reads
Initials and Fireflies Submitted on May 25, 2009 - 22:23 | 222 reads
To Love (in a flash) Submitted on May 16, 2009 - 00:53 | 263 reads
From this Angle Submitted on May 7, 2009 - 01:48 | 297 reads
Up and Down (the end) Submitted on May 6, 2009 - 20:43 | 269 reads
Beauty (and the Beast) Submitted on April 11, 2009 - 21:43 | 300 reads
Late August Submitted on April 6, 2009 - 00:40 | 321 reads
The Yesterday Box (inspiration point) Submitted on March 28, 2009 - 00:19 | 294 reads
Tet and L. Submitted on March 20, 2009 - 23:40 | 330 reads
Rachel (a short sketch) Submitted on March 15, 2009 - 20:02 | 552 reads
Sight Submitted on March 15, 2009 - 19:53 | 364 reads
spacing Submitted on March 9, 2009 - 00:58 | 406 reads
One Memory Submitted on March 8, 2009 - 04:03 | 349 reads
Did You Think We Would Not Miss You? Submitted on March 7, 2009 - 01:15 | 390 reads
Things Lost to Circumstance (and Stupidity) Submitted on March 7, 2009 - 01:11 | 399 reads
(Before the Mirror, Singing... Submitted on March 7, 2009 - 01:02 | 375 reads
