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I have 235 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 83504 times and 85 of my stories have been cherry picked.
31 of my 3,012 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 33 votes

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Moya Rooke

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The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Twelve - 991 words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Twelve - 991 words

When Whittaker and Georgia went back to see how Jamie was they were once...

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Eleven - 1131 Words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Eleven – 1131 Words

While Jamie stood still trying to assess his situation another Grusalien...

The Rehearsal! late I.P.

The Rehearsal! Late I.P.

There we were all on stage awaiting the arrival of Chelsea, Chelsea Le Curr, our celebrated leading lady. She...

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The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Ten - 1177 Words - Updated

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Ten – 1177 Words

Jamie’s lungs were at bursting point as he held his breath not daring to move...

Death is My Living - A Wake Up Call - Late I.P. updated

Death is My Living – A Wake Up Call (Late I.P.) Updated

I have such a serious sombre face,

That lends itself to...

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31 of my comments have received 33 Great Feedback votes

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Oh, Scratch,

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2013

Oh, Scratch,

Now what are we to think?  Brother Michael...at this point in the story he is such an ambiguous character.  On the one hand he seems to be everyone's friend but then there is that quiet voice that is so quiet he...

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Posted in Daniel 18: Brother Michael

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Scratch, I knew I would get

Posted on Fri, 29 Nov 2013

Scratch, I knew I would get here eventually. How well you planted the seeds for this one in the last one.  I am in awe.  You are wratcheting up the tension surrrounding Daniel so carefully and so restrained.  Now we have Jake's...

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Posted in Daniel 13: Group

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Your memories unlike flowers

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014

Your memories unlike flowers will never die. They will always be a bouquet in your  heart because they have been well watered with your tears.and continue to  flourish in the sunlight of your love,

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Posted in Tomorrow Would Have Been Her Birthday

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

Hello Tina,

Battersea Power station1 Derek's dad worked all his life there includng  during the war.  ...

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Posted in If Pigs Could Fly

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Hello again,

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014

Hello again,

I think Danny does know what Alex is getting him to agree to and he is all the more courageous for that.  In Daniel you have created an eleven year old super hero and I don't mean a comic type.  He is a character...

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Posted in Daniel 31: Deal

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Hello Joe,

Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014

Hello Joe,

I'm so pleased you haven't given up on Trains.  It is an excellent story which I was really enjoying..  See,  I've even got a good memory but I think I said before that I thought Trains was even better...

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Posted in Welcome To England

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Hello  Richard,

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2014

Hello  Richard,

The postman is your crusader but in today's society, he would be the one hauled up in court even without the toast incident.  This is a really good story that held me riveted right to the end,  but I...

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Posted in The postman

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This is a fantastic piece

Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014

This is a fantastic piece that expresses your anger at the double standards so ruthlessly applied to women.  No, not even women, just girls who have been raped and are therefore blameless.  I think all religions are divisive because all...

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Posted in Crime and Punishment

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Hello Bee,

Posted on Tue, 27 May 2014

Hello Bee,

Another great poem from you.  Your poems always make me think They are so subtle and  I love mulling over the way your words are  chosen and arranged as with the last line of each stanza turning the previous lines...

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Posted in A Glass of Water

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Hello,

Posted on Thu, 24 Apr 2014

Hello,

Really enjoyed your story and a good lead into your longer story.

Moya

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Posted in Class warfare, 1916

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