I have 236 stories published in
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My stories have been read 87185 times and 85 of my stories have been cherry picked.
34 of my 3,070 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes
I used to have a profile, but it disappeared so I am writing this to bring things up to date. First off, I love this site so much it has made such a difference to my life. Now, if I write something and I post it to ABC it will get read by someone and if it's any way decent then it can get read by quite a number of people. I feel my writing has improved and that is, in the main, because of the help I have received from quite a few people on here. I don't feel qualified to give in depth feedback although I try to help with the more obvious errors, but I mainly like to encourage people as I feel that is the best way for me to give something back .
The other reason I feel indebted to this site is the comments people have made about my work has increased my confidence no end. Before, I would never show anything I had written to anyone other than my husband and his response was always, 'Yes dear, very good.'
So thank you ABC Tales and thank you to all the people who have commented on what I, laughingly, call, my work.
By Denzella on Tue, 29 Jul 2014
The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Thirteen - 1073 words
Whittaker, Georgia and Jamie were pushed forward to join the others...
By Denzella on Wed, 23 Jul 2014
The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Twelve - 991 words
When Whittaker and Georgia went back to see how Jamie was they were once...
By Denzella on Tue, 15 Jul 2014
The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Eleven – 1131 Words
While Jamie stood still trying to assess his situation another Grusalien...
By Denzella on Mon, 30 Jun 2014
The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Ten – 1177 Words
Jamie’s lungs were at bursting point as he held his breath not daring to move...
34 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes
Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2013
Now what are we to think? Brother Michael...at this point in the story he is such an ambiguous character. On the one hand he seems to be everyone's friend but then there is that quiet voice that is so quiet he...Read full comment
Posted in Daniel 18: Brother Michael
Scratch, I knew I would get
Posted on Fri, 29 Nov 2013
Scratch, I knew I would get here eventually. How well you planted the seeds for this one in the last one. I am in awe. You are wratcheting up the tension surrrounding Daniel so carefully and so restrained. Now we have Jake's...Read full comment
Posted in Daniel 13: Group
Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014
Yes, you should think about becoming an estate agent. You made the man's open air home sound like a desirable des res. But I too liked the idea that the man found a use for other people's trash...Read full comment
Posted in Another Man's Treasure
'And you looked like Jesus on
Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014
'And you looked like Jesus on roll- ups' and 'the words slugged by' The first creates for me an image of Jesus on roll-ups wearing Jesus sandals. Don't know why. The second quote comes over like a punch to...Read full comment
Posted in Being Wrong
Your memories unlike flowers
Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014
Your memories unlike flowers will never die. They will always be a bouquet in your heart because they have been well watered with your tears.and continue to flourish in the sunlight of your love,
...Read full comment
Posted in Tomorrow Would Have Been Her Birthday
Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014
I think Danny does know what Alex is getting him to agree to and he is all the more courageous for that. In Daniel you have created an eleven year old super hero and I don't mean a comic type. He is a character...Read full comment
Posted in Daniel 31: Deal