Denzella

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I have 240 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 94130 times and 87 of my stories have been cherry picked.
37 of my 3,117 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 39 votes

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Moya Rooke

I used to have a profile, but it disappeared so I am writing this to bring things up to date.  First off, I love this site so much it has made such a difference to my life.  Now, if I write something and I post it to ABC it will get read by someone and if it's any way decent then it can get read by quite a number of people.  I feel my writing has improved and that is, in the main, because of the help I have received from quite a few people on here.  I don't feel qualified to give in depth feedback although I try to help with the more obvious errors, but I mainly like to encourage people as I feel that is the best way for me to give something back .  

The other reason I feel indebted to this site is the comments people have made about my work has increased my confidence no end.  Before, I would never show anything I had written to anyone other than my husband and his response was always, 'Yes dear, very good.'

So thank you ABC Tales and thank you to all the people who have commented on what I, laughingly,  call, my work.

My stories

Flight DCT 13

Flight DCT 13 1592 words - Cobbled together from some old emails

Another one from The Parkinson's Players' Revue 'Where...

Cherry

It's Still Another Day! (I.P.)

It’s Still Another Day! (I.P.) 1478 words

The two boys left her for dead, but, unbeknown to them she was still breathing. The lads were no...

Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 words

Belonging, Loyalty, Freedom and Independence (Late I.P.) 566 Words

There are many definitions of all four words, but I have taken just one...

Cherry

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Fourteen - 1147 words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Fourteen - 1147 words

Seeing Jamie’s reaction all three started to move nearer to the enclosure...

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Thirteen - 1073 Words - Updated

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Thirteen – 1174 words

Whittaker, Georgia and Jamie were pushed forward to join the others...

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37 of my comments have received 39 Great Feedback votes

2 Votes

Oh, Scratch,

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2013

Oh, Scratch,

Now what are we to think?  Brother Michael...at this point in the story he is such an ambiguous character.  On the one hand he seems to be everyone's friend but then there is that quiet voice that is so quiet he...

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Posted in Daniel 18: Brother Michael

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Scratch, I knew I would get

Posted on Fri, 29 Nov 2013

Scratch, I knew I would get here eventually. How well you planted the seeds for this one in the last one.  I am in awe.  You are wratcheting up the tension surrrounding Daniel so carefully and so restrained.  Now we have Jake's...

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Posted in Daniel 13: Group

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2014

Hello Tina,

It's me again.  I sense your longing to be with your daughter shown by the words 'endless present' but then you would grieve just as much for the daughter still living in this 'endless...

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Posted in The Thing about Autumn

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Yes, I think I am getting

Posted on Sun, 21 Sep 2014

Yes, I think I am getting some idea of what you are about here.  I too have come to the conclusion that each day is precious and it is often the small things that give us the biggest lift.

Enjoyed your thoughts.

Moya...

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Posted in Don't Ask

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Dear Tina,

Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2014

Dear Tina,

But it was you who was always there with the drink she was dying for.  You who sat on the edge of her bed when she needed you and not just at the end but throughout her life.  Maybe when you are asleep she comes and...

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Posted in Dear Darling...

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014

Hello Tina,

Old he might be and second best you might be,  but he is still the living link between the one that went ahead and the one that had to stay behind.

Moya

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Posted in Present Imperfect

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014

Hello Tina,

Yes,  you should think about becoming an estate agent.  You made the man's open air home sound like a desirable des res.  But  I too liked the idea that the man found a use for other people's trash...

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Posted in Another Man's Treasure

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Your memories unlike flowers

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014

Your memories unlike flowers will never die. They will always be a bouquet in your  heart because they have been well watered with your tears.and continue to  flourish in the sunlight of your love,

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Posted in Tomorrow Would Have Been Her Birthday

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

Hello Tina,

Battersea Power station1 Derek's dad worked all his life there includng  during the war.  ...

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Posted in If Pigs Could Fly

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Hello again,

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014

Hello again,

I think Danny does know what Alex is getting him to agree to and he is all the more courageous for that.  In Daniel you have created an eleven year old super hero and I don't mean a comic type.  He is a character...

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Posted in Daniel 31: Deal

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