I really enjoy writing but find it difficult to get constructive feedback. Usually what I get is "Yes, very good." Nothing more than that. When what I really want to know is -what parts did you like and what parts didn't work for you? That is if I can get anyone to read it in the first place. I have Parkinson's and I am finding it increasingly difficult to type which is very frustrating. Plays and poems are the main focus for my writing. This is so disjointed but hitting all wrong keys. Apologies!
My Stories
"Fed Up?" No? Read This and You Soon Will Be! Submitted on May 28, 2012 - 08:44 | 42 reads
Fecundity! Are You Kidding? I.P. Submitted on May 28, 2012 - 08:16 | 22 reads
The Female Menopause! Submitted on May 22, 2012 - 06:02 | 47 reads
Bedtime Drink! A Talking Head Submitted on May 14, 2012 - 06:40 | 86 reads
The Wrong Bus I.P. Submitted on May 14, 2012 - 06:25 | 61 reads
Thoughts! Submitted on May 8, 2012 - 04:35 | 81 reads
Court in the Rain I.P. Part Two Submitted on May 1, 2012 - 05:38 | 110 reads
Court in the Rain! I.P. Part One Submitted on May 1, 2012 - 05:24 | 88 reads
My Mum and The Christmas Washing Machine Story! Submitted on April 27, 2012 - 07:49 | 117 reads
My Diet Submitted on April 24, 2012 - 07:55 | 60 reads
Last Call for Novice Bitch! Submitted on April 11, 2012 - 08:12 | 85 reads
Springing to Life! (I P) Submitted on April 5, 2012 - 07:33 | 66 reads
'If' from an idea by Kipling and There's More! Submitted on April 4, 2012 - 06:56 | 59 reads
My Mum - The Visit! Submitted on April 2, 2012 - 08:01 | 108 reads
Loneliness! (I P) Submitted on March 30, 2012 - 07:50 | 105 reads
A Report on Questiion Time in the House Submitted on March 29, 2012 - 05:53 | 45 reads
My Mum and The Loss Adjustor! Submitted on March 28, 2012 - 08:18 | 107 reads
"Despatches" Submitted on March 21, 2012 - 07:44 | 74 reads
We Must Give Back! Submitted on March 16, 2012 - 05:53 | 80 reads
My Mum - The Funeral! Submitted on March 15, 2012 - 08:09 | 139 reads
Rags to Riches I P Submitted on March 13, 2012 - 08:36 | 131 reads
Inspiration Comes With the Dawn! Submitted on March 13, 2012 - 06:13 | 80 reads
My Mum - The Final Curtain Submitted on March 8, 2012 - 07:53 | 184 reads
My Mum - Escapades! Submitted on March 6, 2012 - 09:01 | 101 reads
A Figment of My Imagination...Or is it? I P Submitted on March 5, 2012 - 10:04 | 100 reads
My Friend Joan Submitted on March 3, 2012 - 00:00 | 106 reads
The Male Menopause! Submitted on February 28, 2012 - 22:43 | 114 reads
A Mother's Advice to her Daughter! Submitted on February 23, 2012 - 23:02 | 260 reads
Names and their Importance in Literature! Submitted on February 16, 2012 - 20:02 | 216 reads
"Checkout" Scene Seven Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on February 14, 2012 - 07:35 | 78 reads
Parkimson's m ever presentfriend Submitted on February 13, 2012 - 07:38 | 138 reads
Checkout" Scene Six Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on February 9, 2012 - 07:10 | 101 reads
My Mum and A Piano for Patrick! Submitted on February 7, 2012 - 10:30 | 95 reads
In Answer to the Question "Tell Me What Love Is?" Submitted on February 6, 2012 - 20:20 | 122 reads
When the Urge is Upon You! Submitted on February 3, 2012 - 08:27 | 95 reads
The Summer Ball and Weapons of Mass Destruction! Submitted on February 3, 2012 - 07:22 | 85 reads
The Open Door Submitted on February 1, 2012 - 08:43 | 94 reads
"OR" Submitted on February 1, 2012 - 08:28 | 72 reads
"Checkout" Scene Five Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on January 30, 2012 - 22:24 | 90 reads
More Wartime Recollections of Mum Flo's Family Submitted on January 28, 2012 - 22:14 | 132 reads
"Checkout" Scene Four Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on January 23, 2012 - 07:10 | 94 reads
First Day at The Grammar! Submitted on January 22, 2012 - 22:40 | 193 reads
If Dementia Comes! Submitted on January 21, 2012 - 22:24 | 116 reads
In Search of Love (I.P.) Submitted on January 21, 2012 - 22:15 | 98 reads
"Checkout" Scene Three Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on January 21, 2012 - 08:03 | 112 reads
"Checkout" Scene 2 Supermarket Teashop Morning Submitted on January 18, 2012 - 16:34 | 129 reads
My Mum - The Party Dress! Submitted on January 16, 2012 - 12:45 | 275 reads
The Funeral Submitted on January 14, 2012 - 22:45 | 124 reads
"Checkout" Submitted on January 12, 2012 - 22:02 | 119 reads
Death is my Living! Submitted on January 11, 2012 - 06:40 | 192 reads
Three Dead Twins Submitted on January 9, 2012 - 06:47 | 181 reads
The Enigma Submitted on January 6, 2012 - 08:04 | 93 reads
My Mum Revisited Submitted on January 5, 2012 - 07:49 | 150 reads
Friendship Submitted on January 4, 2012 - 08:45 | 129 reads
The Darkened Room Submitted on January 2, 2012 - 20:24 | 158 reads
A Monologue Part Two The Buffet Submitted on January 2, 2012 - 08:59 | 112 reads
Fuck! Submitted on December 30, 2011 - 22:00 | 194 reads
Chocolate! Submitted on December 30, 2011 - 16:24 | 168 reads
The Invitation A Monologue Part One Submitted on December 29, 2011 - 21:44 | 138 reads
Love Waits Patient Submitted on December 28, 2011 - 08:17 | 117 reads
Heroes! Submitted on December 22, 2011 - 03:53 | 119 reads
My Mum Submitted on December 21, 2011 - 08:22 | 187 reads
A Friendly Face Submitted on December 19, 2011 - 08:11 | 125 reads
The Party A Monologue Submitted on December 19, 2011 - 07:59 | 176 reads
The Party Submitted on December 19, 2011 - 07:11 | 156 reads
My Big Cooking Adventure! Submitted on December 15, 2011 - 20:00 | 228 reads
A Dish Best Served Cold Submitted on December 15, 2011 - 04:54 | 203 reads
