Denzella

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I have 236 stories published in 6 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 87185 times and 85 of my stories have been cherry picked.
34 of my 3,070 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 36 votes

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Moya Rooke

I used to have a profile, but it disappeared so I am writing this to bring things up to date.  First off, I love this site so much it has made such a difference to my life.  Now, if I write something and I post it to ABC it will get read by someone and if it's any way decent then it can get read by quite a number of people.  I feel my writing has improved and that is, in the main, because of the help I have received from quite a few people on here.  I don't feel qualified to give in depth feedback although I try to help with the more obvious errors, but I mainly like to encourage people as I feel that is the best way for me to give something back .  

The other reason I feel indebted to this site is the comments people have made about my work has increased my confidence no end.  Before, I would never show anything I had written to anyone other than my husband and his response was always, 'Yes dear, very good.'

So thank you ABC Tales and thank you to all the people who have commented on what I, laughingly,  call, my work.

My stories

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Thirteen - 1073 Words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Thirteen - 1073 words

Whittaker, Georgia and Jamie were pushed forward to join the others...

Cherry

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Twelve - 991 words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title - Part Twelve - 991 words

When Whittaker and Georgia went back to see how Jamie was they were once...

The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Eleven - 1131 Words

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Eleven – 1131 Words

While Jamie stood still trying to assess his situation another Grusalien...

The Rehearsal! late I.P.

The Rehearsal! Late I.P.

There we were all on stage awaiting the arrival of Chelsea, Chelsea Le Curr, our celebrated leading lady. She...

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The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Ten - 1177 Words - Updated

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The Labour Planet – A Working Title – Part Ten – 1177 Words

Jamie’s lungs were at bursting point as he held his breath not daring to move...

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34 of my comments have received 36 Great Feedback votes

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Oh, Scratch,

Posted on Mon, 23 Dec 2013

Oh, Scratch,

Now what are we to think?  Brother Michael...at this point in the story he is such an ambiguous character.  On the one hand he seems to be everyone's friend but then there is that quiet voice that is so quiet he...

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Posted in Daniel 18: Brother Michael

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Scratch, I knew I would get

Posted on Fri, 29 Nov 2013

Scratch, I knew I would get here eventually. How well you planted the seeds for this one in the last one.  I am in awe.  You are wratcheting up the tension surrrounding Daniel so carefully and so restrained.  Now we have Jake's...

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Posted in Daniel 13: Group

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2014

Hello Tina,

Old he might be and second best you might be,  but he is still the living link between the one that went ahead and the one that had to stay behind.

Moya

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Posted in Present Imperfect

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Fri, 15 Aug 2014

Hello Tina,

Yes,  you should think about becoming an estate agent.  You made the man's open air home sound like a desirable des res.  But  I too liked the idea that the man found a use for other people's trash...

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Posted in Another Man's Treasure

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'And you looked like Jesus on

Posted on Sat, 02 Aug 2014

'And you looked like Jesus on roll- ups' and 'the words slugged by'  The first creates for me an image of Jesus on roll-ups wearing Jesus sandals.  Don't know why.  The second quote comes over like a punch to...

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Posted in Being Wrong

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Your memories unlike flowers

Posted on Thu, 10 Jul 2014

Your memories unlike flowers will never die. They will always be a bouquet in your  heart because they have been well watered with your tears.and continue to  flourish in the sunlight of your love,

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Posted in Tomorrow Would Have Been Her Birthday

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Hello Tina,

Posted on Mon, 07 Jul 2014

Hello Tina,

Battersea Power station1 Derek's dad worked all his life there includng  during the war.  ...

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Posted in If Pigs Could Fly

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Hello again,

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2014

Hello again,

I think Danny does know what Alex is getting him to agree to and he is all the more courageous for that.  In Daniel you have created an eleven year old super hero and I don't mean a comic type.  He is a character...

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Posted in Daniel 31: Deal

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Hello Joe,

Posted on Thu, 03 Jul 2014

Hello Joe,

I'm so pleased you haven't given up on Trains.  It is an excellent story which I was really enjoying..  See,  I've even got a good memory but I think I said before that I thought Trains was even better...

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Posted in Welcome To England

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Hello  Richard,

Posted on Fri, 18 Apr 2014

Hello  Richard,

The postman is your crusader but in today's society, he would be the one hauled up in court even without the toast incident.  This is a really good story that held me riveted right to the end,  but I...

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Posted in The postman

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