JPH30
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I have 15 stories published in
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My stories have been read 15385 times
and 8 of my stories have been cherry picked.
2 of my 16 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes
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Schadenfreude
You are a bad friend. Deal with it. Accept it and move on. Anything you try and do to change this is a waste of time; learn to accept your inner...
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Everyone Says Hi
Everyone Says Hi I excuse myself from the discussion my uncle’s are having about which way was quickest to get here, because, in the short history of...
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Another Lonely Boy
Another Lonely Boy Well it was a day where I needed reminding that I was still alive. I’d woken up in my hostel covered in sick. I was alone. The...
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Tribal Dating
Tribal Dating Robbie Boy or Man? Boy Age: 20 Height: 5’7 Weight: 65 kg Hair: Blonde Eyes: Grey I’m lying on my bed, my tracksuit bottoms round my...
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For the children
October, 2015 Labour won the election, and Ed Miliband is now the PM. Nick Clegg became a Tory peer for ‘personal’ reasons, and David Cameron is...
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Beautiful sentiment. A small
Posted on Sun, 14 Sep 2014
Beautiful sentiment. A small suggestion - the ! steals away the mood. As a reader, I prefer less influence from the author. Beautiful writing though.
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Very inventive and original.
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2014
Very inventive and original. Word spacing could be off-putting? It's akin to a chapter in David Levithan's 'The Realm of Possibility'.
Read full commentPosted in Alice Travels.