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I have 1838 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2548526 times and 536 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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The King of kings defeats King Herod’s plan

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] God worked his purpose, saved despite King Herod’s evil scheme. He sent to Joseph to take flight – preserve...

Toddler opening presents

When you are one it’s really fun to tear off the paper to find what’s inside there. … And then that bag they put the wrapping paper in …
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Cherry

Why didn’t I really like it?

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/A_Girl_with_a_Watering_Can A copy of this was given by an aunt when I was quite young. She was loving and kindly but...

Come! See! [6. of series based on old carols]

O come, all you faithless … see the wonder in Bethlehem. Baby, King Jesus, born to be our proxy. O come, do not ignore him, O come, bow now before him, receive his gifts, adore him, Christ, the Lord …
Cherry

The Focussed Day

Focus on love focus on giving focus on joy focus on feasting focus on family and friends and also those drifting – pity and compassion shelter and...

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1320 of my comments have received 1358 Great Feedback votes

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Oh, I really liked that -

Posted on Tue, 22 May 2018

Oh, I really liked that - just thinking of the lovely blossom simply. Short lived, but still lovely as you describe when it first falls, before trampling and mixing with … . Rhiannon

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Posted in on the way to the letterbox

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I did have a little look, and

Posted on Sat, 14 Apr 2018

I did have a little look, and saw a suggestion that pale colours can use the weaker sun better, and are thereore more prevalant in the spring. Will return if gather any more thought on it!! Rhiannon

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Posted in Spring Yellows

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I've been away. Just seen

Posted on Thu, 12 Apr 2018

I've been away. Just seen this. It seems to speak of an attempt to return to where one once knew a welcome, but for some reason there is no acceptance, no resonance. I also thought the line 'the only growing is old.' very telling, and...

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Posted in wind

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! I love to see the crinkled

Posted on Sat, 24 Mar 2018

! I love to see the crinkled up little leaves poking or 'squirting' out! So delicate often of colour and texture too. Rhiannon

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Posted in Growth Spurt

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A lovely idea for Poetry

Posted on Sun, 18 Mar 2018

A lovely idea for Poetry Monthly. If we could donate our heart with its feelings and songs, how would we cultivate it?! Rhiannon

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Posted in Heart Songs ( Poetry Monthly

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 A lovely picture of a family

Posted on Thu, 15 Mar 2018

 A lovely picture of a family happy in the grace, values, and life given by Jesus. Rhiannon

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Posted in Everyone Can Have Life

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A dreamy time of day, and you

Posted on Fri, 09 Mar 2018

A dreamy time of day, and you've caught the sights rarely noticed and descibed them in such interesting ways. I felt the quiet of an evening stroll! Rhiannon

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Posted in Walking home from shopping 8/3/18

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I see you've done some work

Posted on Sat, 03 Mar 2018

I see you've done some work on this, smoothing, clarifying and introducing yet more ideas I think. Lots of interesting metaphors and observations. Personally, I feel you could in time probably make the reading even smoother, but that would...

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Posted in predator (just re uploaded)

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I think much of the time with

Posted on Fri, 02 Mar 2018

I think much of the time with dementia, or other types of memory loss, the self-awareness of that loss is quite limited, especially after the first stages. Sometimes it seems that much is lost that have been very superficial concerns, worries and...

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Posted in Lethe

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Lovely picture. Reminder to

Posted on Fri, 23 Feb 2018

Lovely picture. Reminder to listen to the 'snowball of sounds'! The birds seem to know the season's making gentle progress don't they? I like the idea of their stitching. Rhiannon

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Posted in emperor's new clothes

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