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Beautiful and comfortable,
Posted on Fri, 02 May 2014
Beautiful and comfortable, sprightly, and certainly not in a routine rut! Enjoyed your comfortable musing. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in The Blue Chair
a 'you-shaped hole' – that's
Posted on Mon, 28 Apr 2014
a 'you-shaped hole' – that's very expressive of loss of any kind, and so difficult for anyone else to understand and appreciate.
Read full comment(I remember being so glad when we exchanged our very oil-marked kitchen carpet for a piece of vinyl!) ...
Posted in After You'd Gone...
Choosing pebbles/choosing
Posted on Mon, 21 Apr 2014
Choosing pebbles/choosing words, smooth right through – a vivid metaphor, while keeping private the mysteries of the occasion. Rhiannon
(liked the picture, reminded me of some seen on stormy beaches – I think people return to see if they'...
Read full commentPosted in Stones
Can't say I understand all
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Can't say I understand all your musings here, Tina. But I'm happy that scripture makes clear that Jesus is coming back, but that will be the culmination of all, - yes the resurrection of the dead, but also a judgement, so that it is so important...
Read full commentPosted in A Sudden Resurrection (I.P.)
Apart from your usual
Posted on Sat, 19 Apr 2014
Apart from your usual niftyness with rhythm and rhyme, Alvin, you have opened up, with a light touch, good thoughts about developing a loving care, a real constant sharing and thinking of the others ups and downs, and needs, and not just '...
Read full commentPosted in I NEVER HEARD HER CRY
Is the picture yours, Bee?
Posted on Thu, 17 Apr 2014
Is the picture yours, Bee? This has a lovely feel of painting someone and mixing it with memories and so many thoughts of the person that can't be painted on and yet somehow can affect the painting to somehow impart character and experiences....
Read full commentPosted in Emily
Well, Bee, it just shows - I
Posted on Mon, 07 Apr 2014
Well, Bee, it just shows - I only just noticed this now, because I checked on you, as so often I mostly have a check of the new poetry. I too have a growing list of contributors, many of whom mostly do prose only, and see what I can follow. I've...
Read full commentPosted in Complaint
Hi, Moya, read all three
Posted on Mon, 31 Mar 2014
Hi, Moya, read all three parts together. You seem to have started on a huge labour!
Read full commentI was intrigued by your moving from 'the big, bad businesses' and the pleasure people have in laying into anonymous people as a group, to the more personal...
Posted in The Labour Planet - A Working Title - Part Three
A beautiful place, well
Posted on Tue, 01 Apr 2014
A beautiful place, well described, which I know well, though this seems to have been a sad, poignant journey up. Rhiannon
Read full commentPosted in Mynydd Carningli (for TP's parents)
Nice to remember these family
Posted on Fri, 28 Mar 2014
Nice to remember these family and funny incidents. I feel all such malapropisms I've heard have comepletly gone from my mind, but maybe some will come back. I do remember one of my sons who was reading quite early asking, with bewilderment why...
Read full commentPosted in Out of the Mouths...(I.P.)
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