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I have 1827 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2498873 times and 529 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1309 of my 11,990 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1346 votes

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“This night I will …”

“I’ll stay awake and keep so quiet and see them bring …
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Consequences of God becoming man

y oung ruler … Z acchaeus … the baby came and grew and then Jesus, the man, so cared that we may live anew …
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Even Father Christmas blown over …!

Grey ‘air-ship’ convoy clouds lumber across the sky, trees shake and bend traffic-light pole sways leaves skitter about (and something sharp hit my...
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Sorry?

"I’m sorry I’m in a mess … "I'm sorry for the mess …
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1309 of my comments have received 1346 Great Feedback votes

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That sounds a wonderful

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

That sounds a wonderful exploration of the market: sounds, smells and sight, and conversations. The photos on flicker are amazing and very clear. Rhiannon

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Posted in Tea with the Coppersmith

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A full American breakfast!

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024

A full American breakfast! Though I think my family have it as a treat often on Saturdays! I can't see them 'roughing it' and fishing for their food yet, but it sounds as if you've got interesting clues fixed up. You spoke about Dad's boots. Have...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 3

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I'm sorry, i missed noticing

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

I'm sorry, i missed noticing this last week. You are keeping up the intriguing mix of the ordinary and quirky fantasy (smelly sneakers and Dad's long-ago fantasy adventure) I was amused by the comment of the 'dog' having 'to accommodate her...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 2

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it will take some unravelling

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

it will take some unravelling. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (6)

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Of course it's sometimes easy

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Of course it's sometimes easy to just say, 'Oh, I don't remember', and carry on before it gets anyone worried! Once in a film, someone gave the name of something in Welsh, and what it actually meant was 'whatdyoucallit'!  When I was growing up,...

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Posted in Forgetting something? Just say London Bridge.

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Much there of the time of

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Much there of the time of year, especially on brighter days. We've just been out in the countryside with the late afternoon shadows and glinting sunshine (which may form into a poem soon!)

The stars of the clear night well protrayed too....

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Posted in After the Snow

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Thank you. We can learn from

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

Thank you. We can learn from others, but each need ot have our own useful thought if there is point in writing! Rhiannon

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Posted in 'A bump of originality'*

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I think your writing was more

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

I think your writing was more visual than the photo, with the moon through and on the trees, and the wind howling through!

Particularly liked the last 3 lines (though, now unseen, its 'caressing' work will continue!) Wasn't sure of the...

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Posted in Silent Mystic

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thanks.Yes! it's no wonder

Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024

thanks.Yes! it's no wonder Rev Awdry and others have put faces on them is it? My father's first car was called Canta because, he said, 'Canta Ford it'!  There is a Welsh rhyme for children about 'Morus y gwynt' (Morris the wind) so my friend's...

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Posted in What happened, little car?

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Exactly, but all welcome to

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

Exactly, but all welcome to do so! Thank you, Jacques. Rhiannon

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Posted in Meeting the King

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