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I have 1826 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
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White stars and meadow bells

Woodland stars … Rich yellow cuplets …Fairy-skirt cowbells mauve …
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Do we spread love?

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] A world of love – for such we long: but what to do when done a wrong? We may need justice to be done … but still true love can … restoration bring.
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Durk Willems

(died 16 May 1569) His pursuer had fallen through the thin ice — what would he do?
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Suddenly, not there …

Whether rich or poor, kind or cruel all face those moments – someone is missing, gone, incommunicado – can’t phone, can’t see, can’t touch a final...

Faith, Hope, Love … and the greatest of these is love

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Faith – believing all God says is so good … faith’s reality will show as forbearance, kindness grow.

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1309 of my comments have received 1346 Great Feedback votes

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A relaxing picture, peaceful

Posted on Sun, 19 May 2019

A relaxing picture, peaceful except for the wind and waves! Rhiannon

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Posted in At Lake Babine BC

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A lovely first verse! Your

Posted on Mon, 13 May 2019

A lovely first verse! Your second verse is deliberately contrastingly bleak, I presume to contrast consumerism-living with the wealth of the peace and beauty of creation we have to enjoy. I don't think that it is that the wealthy that would have...

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Posted in bluebells

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How veru interesting that the

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2019

How very interesting that the puzzle of those precise measurements in the vision led you to contemplate the precision of the creation. I studied biochemistry (a long time ago!) and was amazed at the detail of how things work together precisely...

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Posted in Precision.

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As Penny4athought says, you

Posted on Sun, 05 May 2019

As Penny4athought says, you describe so effectively the shock of the tumble, and the pain, and the instinctive response of the believer of thankfulness for life spared, and then the awareness of need of help in the pain. He doesn't take away all...

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Posted in There's Something

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The one you found a rock gone

Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2019

The one you found a rock gone, but the 'sand' left in its wake still gives steadiness? A rock having barnacles from life's bruises, but also thrift joy bubbling out is an evocative picture. Rhiannon

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Posted in rock

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Another brief and neat

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019

Another brief and neat thoughtful little one. Interesting that with all the desperate situations, some of the slaves must have been happier than some of the masters, because of knowing God's comfort, and some slave-master relationships developed...

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Posted in These Ain't No Daisy Chains

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A perceptive little one.

Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2019

A perceptive little one. Interesting comment on the effect of drudgery encouraging temptation. And the play on mourning/morning. Actually in that 4th line from the end , I suspect you don't want the 'is' in the line? Rhiannon

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Posted in Wish YOU were here

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Very moving, Graham. The fact

Posted on Sat, 27 Apr 2019

Very moving, Graham. The fact that she could talk out to you at least shows she valued you, even though probably aware that the closeness was lost at present, and also probably had satisfaction that your life was working out reasonably. And would...

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Posted in One Chance And I Blew It

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Thank you, Jane. There have

Posted on Thu, 18 Apr 2019

Thank you, Jane. There have been moving stories from those caught up in disasters also, and the cameraderie and also the dawning of faith and prayer for whether they be rescued or die. The Chilean mining accident and rescue after 2 months was...

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Posted in Going Down Below

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I like the encouragement of

Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2019

I like the encouragement of viewing a static house and being inspired to think, as of a film running, of the happenings and occupants over so many years.Inside the envelope, as you say!

Her smile a scent forgot is a lovely line...

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Posted in change of address

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