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I have 1837 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
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What happened, little car?

“Little car, little car, have you been far? have you been far?” ‘They drove me off and made me go fast and then just kept going, I was drained at...
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Meeting the King

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] … dressed in a clean outfit … all your past that’s wrong must be wiped clean, and gain new attitude of heart where selfishness has been.
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Night Help

Slowly, silently, the lamplight falls here and there as the farmer strolls back from the barn where the soft beams lit the struggles as ewe and man...
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Working together

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] Youth with strength and fresh new vision, ready, speedy hands and feet. Those grown older, tired and slower cannot with their speed compete. …
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Digging up dirt

Many gladly dig, revealing others’ sins, their own concealing; don’t consider pressures past trivialising sins which now leave all aghast. But now,...
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1320 of my comments have received 1358 Great Feedback votes

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Some thoughtful comments and

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Some thoughtful comments and gatherings of info. The history of the region is so complex. I have heard that actually Ukraine is older than Russia. But boundaries and people movement within continents have been so fluid at times probably. How much...

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Posted in After Russian Rain (A Postscript from Moscow)

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Evocative. Reminds of

Posted on Mon, 12 Feb 2024

Evocative. Reminds of 'Sometimes I sits and thinks, and sometimes I just sits' which my mother was fond of quoting. Those without baths must find another haven for just stopping off gird if only for a few moments, like sleep. Clear the mind,...

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Posted in In the Bath

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Wow! so there's a lot of

Posted on Thu, 08 Feb 2024

Wow! so there's a lot of backstory and history here. I hope he's really left it behind, he still seems to know how to act hard. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (11)

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Hopefully she will gradually

Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024

Hopefully she will gradually settle and find the surroundings and people interesting, and her memories of before becoming more hazy, she will become content and happy though maybe still feeling confused. Rhiannon

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Posted in The Home

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It would be better to own up

Posted on Wed, 07 Feb 2024

It would be better to own up to his boss, as he had intended straightening things out, I'd think. Leaving it it might look worse later if he was found out, and it would help for them to sort this forger out together? Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (10)

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The last two lines are lovely

Posted on Mon, 05 Feb 2024

The last two lines are lovely. But am I right in thinking this is an occasion of scattering ashes? Rhiannon

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Posted in We Watched from the Shore

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I like to think I think like

Posted on Sat, 03 Feb 2024

I like to think I think like a child, but, I'm always slow on riddles and puns. It was nice to see the simplicity seen by Joey, nice clue. And yes, the dialogue is very readable. Rhiannon

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 4

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I don't think I'd enjoy

Posted on Fri, 02 Feb 2024

I don't think I'd enjoy visiting ancient buildings, espcially highly decorative, but can appreciate the work that has gone into them. I tend ot prefer ruins and open countryside!, but buildings give a guide to the history of the people. Nations (...

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Posted in The Gaddafi Effect

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I like having the chapters

Posted on Thu, 01 Feb 2024

I like having the chapters this legnth.Enough to absorb and doesn't need too long time commitment each time! Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (8)

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That's a perceptive comment,

Posted on Wed, 31 Jan 2024

That's a perceptive comment, and I guess it is why I love being drawn to notice these things that still are there to be seen, as you say honed down to the basic shape of the branches, tree trunks etc, and as the plant covering is less and weak,...

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Posted in January Skies

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