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I have 1835 stories published in 16 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2536303 times and 535 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1318 of my 12,051 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1356 votes

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Storm

Wind battering, rattling, howling, thunder growling, rain pounding, ground flooding, shelter shaking, hearts quaking, loose tiles lifted, breaking,...
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Waiting, wanting

Midnight chimes but hours of night still to come before … fresh …
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Much more startling…

[Continuing the hymn-for-Sundays series] The shepherds saw a startling sight, but the sight they went to see – the little baby born that night they realised now was he who …
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Gold cherry

“This night I will …”

“I’ll stay awake and keep so quiet and see them bring …
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Consequences of God becoming man

y oung ruler … Z acchaeus … the baby came and grew and then Jesus, the man, so cared that we may live anew …
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1318 of my comments have received 1356 Great Feedback votes

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A full American breakfast!

Posted on Sun, 28 Jan 2024

A full American breakfast! Though I think my family have it as a treat often on Saturdays! I can't see them 'roughing it' and fishing for their food yet, but it sounds as if you've got interesting clues fixed up. You spoke about Dad's boots. Have...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 3

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I'm sorry, i missed noticing

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

I'm sorry, i missed noticing this last week. You are keeping up the intriguing mix of the ordinary and quirky fantasy (smelly sneakers and Dad's long-ago fantasy adventure) I was amused by the comment of the 'dog' having 'to accommodate her...

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 2

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it will take some unravelling

Posted on Mon, 29 Jan 2024

it will take some unravelling. Rhiannon

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Posted in New Directions (6)

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Of course it's sometimes easy

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Of course it's sometimes easy to just say, 'Oh, I don't remember', and carry on before it gets anyone worried! Once in a film, someone gave the name of something in Welsh, and what it actually meant was 'whatdyoucallit'!  When I was growing up,...

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Posted in Forgetting something? Just say London Bridge.

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Much there of the time of

Posted on Fri, 26 Jan 2024

Much there of the time of year, especially on brighter days. We've just been out in the countryside with the late afternoon shadows and glinting sunshine (which may form into a poem soon!)

The stars of the clear night well protrayed too....

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Posted in After the Snow

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Thank you. We can learn from

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

Thank you. We can learn from others, but each need ot have our own useful thought if there is point in writing! Rhiannon

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Posted in 'A bump of originality'*

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I think your writing was more

Posted on Thu, 25 Jan 2024

I think your writing was more visual than the photo, with the moon through and on the trees, and the wind howling through!

Particularly liked the last 3 lines (though, now unseen, its 'caressing' work will continue!) Wasn't sure of the...

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Posted in Silent Mystic

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thanks.Yes! it's no wonder

Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024

thanks.Yes! it's no wonder Rev Awdry and others have put faces on them is it? My father's first car was called Canta because, he said, 'Canta Ford it'!  There is a Welsh rhyme for children about 'Morus y gwynt' (Morris the wind) so my friend's...

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Posted in What happened, little car?

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Exactly, but all welcome to

Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024

Exactly, but all welcome to do so! Thank you, Jacques. Rhiannon

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Posted in Meeting the King

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Amusing mix of the fantastic

Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024

Amusing mix of the fantastic with the very ordinary smelly sneakers! Rhiannon

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Posted in "Unwanted Magic" 1

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