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Posted on Thu, 19 Jun 2014
Very good poem here Tina. I love the undercurrent of bitterness that I taste and the unbirthed scream that seems to be biding its time. Wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in No Fairy-Tale – This
Hello Omar!
Posted on Wed, 18 Jun 2014
Ok you said that you would value some feedback? First off, I would caution you against telling people that they can be 'brutal' it can and often does cause the recipient more pain than gain. I am not going to be brutal, there is never any need...
Read full commentPosted in Into Darkness: Chapter 1, Section(s) 5 & 6
Welcome
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
Honest and heartfelt. I guess that only someone who's been through only truly knows what it's like.
Read full commentPosted in Uncovered In Recovery
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Posted on Fri, 13 Jun 2014
There y' go.
ps don't ever bullshit me with the 'I never leave Glasgee, York's far too far y'ken' shite ever again.
Read full commentPosted in Unbounders Away
Good Feedback
Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2014
Excellent feedback from magicdarer and I can see that edit suggestion from Bee has been acted on. I think that it was the right alteration to make.
I have read this a number of times and my admiration has grown over time. The themes and...
Read full commentPosted in Pretty Wings
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Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
What can I say?
Read full commentPosted in The Bloody Spikes
Justified Anger
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2014
So totally agree with this AD1. I said somewhere else that every single one of those spikes is this country's shameless equivalent of an African blood diamond. What has this country been brought to. It is an utter, unmitigated DISGRACE.
Read full commentPosted in The Bloody Spikes
Wow!
Posted on Tue, 10 Jun 2014
That is powerful. The raw emotion tumbles out of it like the rocks out of the back of that lorry. Odd that we both should touch on the theme of hypocrisy but approach it in different ways and different genres. Conviction oozes out from this...
Read full commentPosted in Crime and Punishment
Superb!
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2014
This gets better and better as it progresses. So many good things could be said about this one paul_a. But I'll just leave it at that. Well done.
Read full commentPosted in Just Add Egg
A pacey and well written piece.
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2014
Some typos to edit out. Here's one to start with:
"She could almost taste the Warnick’s Advocat (Warninks Advocaat)."
and:
"I though (thought) chanting was supposed to chillax you?
This is...
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