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Surprised that this poem hasn
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2014
Surprised that this poem hasn't garnered a few more comments David, I really like it. Written with a simplicity that augments it and that in itself is a mark of quality. This is the first of yours that I have read (I think) but it won't be the...
A fantastic travelogue made fascinating by the description of of the effects of cultural perception. I hope that there is a second part to come that puts us 'in country' alongside of you. This is a very good piece of writing Tina, more please...
And it remains to this day one of the most disgraceful episodes of British colonialism among the litany of hundreds if not thousands of others. Not in my name.
Just a technical prompt if you don't mind? You have posted your piece on your 'Front Page' rather than in a collection as it were. I know that it takes a bit of getting used to but where we are writing now is where...
Surprised that this poem hasn
Posted on Fri, 21 Feb 2014
Surprised that this poem hasn't garnered a few more comments David, I really like it. Written with a simplicity that augments it and that in itself is a mark of quality. This is the first of yours that I have read (I think) but it won't be the...
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Another good episode. A typo
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014
Another good episode. A typo to consider:
"and then the guy just feel (fell) down".
Read full commentPosted in Tales of Ancient Rome: Salidia and Lydia Chapter 2
I think that this is very
Posted on Wed, 19 Feb 2014
I think that this is very readable. Ease back on the literal, for example:
"In a few heart beats he was on the ground dead and she was standing over him, glaring down in hatred at him"
the "in hatred" is completely...
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But who is he?
Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2014
But who is he?
Good poem Leanne.
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A fantastic travelogue made
Posted on Mon, 10 Feb 2014
A fantastic travelogue made fascinating by the description of of the effects of cultural perception. I hope that there is a second part to come that puts us 'in country' alongside of you. This is a very good piece of writing Tina, more please...
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This episode reminds me why I
Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2014
This episode reminds me why I'm stupid not to keep up with you as you post them.
I too love the last paragraph - one of the best I've read in a long time but it's not just that last bit, the whole thing is good.
As always your...
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And it remains to this day
Posted on Thu, 06 Feb 2014
And it remains to this day one of the most disgraceful episodes of British colonialism among the litany of hundreds if not thousands of others. Not in my name.
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Damn fine poem. Damn fine.
Posted on Fri, 31 Jan 2014
Damn fine poem. Damn fine.
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Hey Julian! That's better.
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2014
Hey Julian! That's better. It's a good poem. I like the cheeky rhyme and the insouciance of the piece. If I've misinterpreted I apologise.
Welcome to ABCtales.
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Hi Julian. Welcome.
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2014
Hi Julian. Welcome.
Just a technical prompt if you don't mind? You have posted your piece on your 'Front Page' rather than in a collection as it were. I know that it takes a bit of getting used to but where we are writing now is where...
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