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Posted on Sat, 18 Apr 2015
Read full commentPosted in True Tales from an Austere Kingdom – the general election
I agree with the above
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015
I agree with the above comments AD1. You really do a fine job with these sensuous poems. Cap doffed.
Read full commentPosted in Forever frozen on the flipside of the night.
Yes!
Posted on Sun, 12 Apr 2015
I love the depth of feeling that you give us in the last four lines Hayley. A real confident finish. I like it!
Read full commentPosted in Playground Games
Philip, someone mentioned
Posted on Mon, 13 Apr 2015
Philip, someone mentioned this as truly excellent - and from your brilliant Icelandic oddysey I think that this is the best I've read.
Absolutely wonderful. No, actually brilliant.
Read full commentPosted in Bathing
Excellent tibi.
Posted on Thu, 16 Apr 2015
Excellent tibi. Congratulations on the cherry award too.
Read full commentPosted in a red car coming
Welcome to ABCtales
Posted on Sat, 11 Apr 2015
Not pretentious at all, at least not in my opinion.
It's worth editing though. there are a few typos that draw unwanted attention. I thought that you were going to involve the narrator in some level of culpability towards the end. Maybe...
Read full commentPosted in My brother, the murderer.
Excellent
Posted on Sat, 28 Feb 2015
I've always liked these hard-boiled soviet era thrillers that you do so well ed. This one as usual did not dissapoint. Great story telling - impossible not to read in fact. Love this.
Read full commentPosted in Frozen Secrets
Good.
Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015
Good.
Read full commentPosted in Nine Months Plus
Oh yes...
Posted on Fri, 13 Feb 2015
This is proving to be a really excellent collection of poetry indeed.
I really like the whole thing here, however from the 'Your Daughters, my sons,' line the piece gains further strength and more movement. Time-shifting effectively in...
Read full commentPosted in For S., 8 Poems (7/8)
I agree. There is just
Posted on Wed, 11 Feb 2015
I agree. There is just enough here. Hypnotic in a way. And I like the way that the is series unfolding.
Read full commentPosted in For S., 8 Poems (3-4)
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