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I really enjoyed reading this
Posted on Tue, 30 Oct 2018
I really enjoyed reading this because off the brilliant descriptive prose.it also was making me think on different levels clearly the literate short story as it stands then is almost like a bit of george orwell inspired making me think socio...
Read full commentPosted in The Empathy Files. The Angel of Empathy (1)
I liked reading this it
Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018
I liked reading this it reminded me a bit of the same kind of style and structure of the last piece of yours I read. It works really well and here you keep my interest throughout. This kind of writing I think my favourite genres " social reality...
Read full commentPosted in Gift: A Son's Story (Push)
Yh, ralph this poem is pure
Posted on Thu, 18 Oct 2018
Yh, ralph this poem is pure real I mean mate you have written a pure blinder here. It pretty much stops me and silences me. There is so much here.
I am going to come back to this and try and really look from different view points but on...
Read full commentPosted in Last Rites
I like the rythm in this. Is
Posted on Mon, 10 Dec 2018
I like the rythm in this. Is like what I would call a social reality poem in my genre defined tick list. Kl.
Read full commentPosted in All I Ever Got
Hi andy sorry I not get back
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
Hi andy sorry I not get back sooner. Eh, the collabaration on a project sounds quite an interesting idea. Are you talking about film ? I think that writers working together on projects creates a whole new creative dynamics so yh I mean what kind...
Read full commentPosted in Boudicca
Andy as I mentioned I am
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
Andy as I mentioned I am about to begin writing a feature film script and would like to use your poem in the script if you give me permission. When I complete script I have plans to try and move the project forward. Its a long shot but well...
Read full commentPosted in Boudicca
Cool andy.
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
Cool andy.
I love this and the ending
to be born born born reborn again.
Pure passion in this poem.
Keep writing.
Read full commentPosted in Boudicca
Boudiccia !
Posted on Tue, 13 Nov 2018
Boudiccia !
Thas what came to mind reading this. I was thinking of a writing premise recently based on boudiccia, ( I hope I have spelt her name correctdly ) and your poem fits neatly in.
Nice.
Read full commentPosted in Boudicca
Really good poem.
Posted on Sat, 10 Nov 2018
Really good poem.
Read full commentPosted in WHERE DO YOUNG MEN GO
I liked this. I thought the
Posted on Thu, 08 Nov 2018
I liked this. I thought the heading caught me and then started reading, the early bit catch if you want was really cool and works brilliantly like I wanted to know about the movement of a jam. You capture it really well structured to. I feel this...
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