ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (a novel)

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Hi Chris, i have just read chapter 2 and though there are some great descriptions in in i found i lost my way as you pack far too much in. I feel the chapter lacks a focus as it begins with the narrator about to become a grass dealer and then veers off into a bar and his relationship with Astrid. There is probably two or three chapters material in here. Juliet

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Adventures In A Difficult World (chapter Two) part one

So my implied reader, are you still with me? Should we make this point a beachhead -- our base camp? Shall I put up a flag?

Adventures In A Difficult World (chapter Three) Part one

Chapter Three (Part One) Slowly the mechanical sound of the street outside began to whisper to the consciousness -- coaxing it back from the furthest reaches of a sleep like death.

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (Chapter Three) Part Two

The wine flowed, and the viscous atmosphere poured like syrup, and from the boxes somewhere above us, the music like tangled wire, also pissed into the goo.

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD (CHAPTER FOUR) part one

Chapter Four (part one) Hull So my implied reader, are you still with me? Should we make this point a beachhead -- our base camp? Shall I put up a...

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD. ( chapter one)

ADVENTURES IN A DIFFICULT WORLD chapter one (part one)