Month plus as a Doctor
By magicdarer
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I grin.
I panic.
not a lot.
I interact.
Flirt
Connect
Paid to do this.
I stab
I clean
I tear
Hold
Write
Phone
Paid to do this
Paid to be here
Paid to care
I dole out heath
extend lifespans
of sometimes
dubious quality
but
We are
ALL FUCKING POINTS
ALL FUCKING ALGAE
WHO SAYS I GOT MORE RIGHT
TO EXIST THAN A MICROBE
A TOAD
A PYTHON
DOMINION OVER THE ANIMALS?
BOLLOCKS
DOMINION OVER OTHER RELIGIONS
OTHER CASTES
OTHER PEOPLE
NO NO
THATS JUST FUCKING NASTY
WHAT IF WE DID NOT REALLY MATTER
WE WERE JUST MATTER
AND IT DIDN'T AMOUNT TO MUCH
PLEASE FUCKING LIVE TODAY
MIND YOUR CONSIENCE
YOU ARE FUCKING ALIVE
BECUASE YOU ARE NOT A GHOST
SO ACT
SO BE
TAKE A RISK IF IT MAKES FUN
FACE HIMALYAS OF THE SOUL
FIGHT WHEN YOU HAVE POWER
FOR THE FIGHT'S WORTH FIGHTING
LIVE LIVE LIVE LIVE LIVE LIVE
FOR FUCK'S SAKE
LIVE
CLICK HERE TO LIVE MORE!
NOW FUCK OFF!
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Comments
I am intrigued by the 'click
I am intrigued by the 'click here to live more'. Not sure if I got the intention, but I have a hatred of the internet's 'click here' culture. I also like the use of capitalisation as the writer gathers momentuim in their rage.
I like the force of thought.
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I really enjoyed this. Felt
I really enjoyed this. Felt the passion within it.
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I am not really sure what you
I am not really sure what you meant within your comment but I am quite interested in what your trying to say to me so if you could elaborate in maybe a more straight forward way as getting feedback on my comment could maybe help the way I comment in.future.
Because in another comment on your poem the poet says he feels your rage and this is ok with you. Are rage and passion.not very similar emotions. Could they not be.
No I just dont get your response to my comment and to tell you the truth the part were you say...I will reread it to you makes me feel a bit if a tawt.
But maybe I am misunderstanding you amnd if I am I do apologise fellow poet.
Regards
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Oh thanks for replying
Oh thanks for replying sometimes I can be a bit paranoid and hit the wrong meaning. Thanks for taking the time out to reply. Keep writing.
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