Soundwaves
By Alfie Shoyger
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Under the glow of the spotty-faced moon,
a plough, a small bear and an orangey Venus,
ascends the percussion of wheels on a track
as grasshoppers fiddle away on their wings.
A chorus of herons shoots up in the air,
then a terrier belts out a howling lament.
The train-horn crescendoes, first high and then low,
before the percussion trails off in the night.
Reflected in water and rising and falling,
the trees on the opposite side of the lake
look like soundwaves.
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I really like the
I really like the observations in your poem.
Jenny.
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Like Jenny, I enjoyed the
Like Jenny, I enjoyed the different aspects of the scene brought out, and the final three-line contrast complementing the sounds of the first section. We don't seem to hear so many grasshoppers and crickets now. Rhiannon
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